Debbie
What a wonderful write. How moving and heartfelt are your words. They touched me deeply. Excellent job!

Where was hope when light had gone?
Where was hope when night had given way to dark?
Or is hope, like a withering romance, a delusion?
...I hope not.
O, how I hope not!

I loved the ending of this piece.
Take care Cindy

My beautiful twin =)
I truely loved this poem, Your word choice was amazing and flowed amazingly as always. For an old piece of work it was portrayed with pure beauty. Really stunning. Well done debbers. ~mel

"Like the waning moon of the night,
Has bust itself from my languid soul."

Your descriptions are always so amazing Debbie! How do you do it.
I always feel as if i'm right there as you're speaking the words..
Love it
5/5
*Gem*

''Or is hope, like a withering romance, a delusion?''

I absolutely adore that line.

I really liked this, it was different and unique, emotions are clear to see behind the written words, flow is good throughout and the imagery you used created vivid pictures.

Excellent

The ending part of this poem really caught my eye.
wonderful =]]

The ending part of this poem really caught my eye.
wonderful =]]

Great job but why does it say old draft at the bottom do you just mean it is an old one of yours or what?? but good job and thanks for the comment i fixed the everlasting part lol thanks and good job

keenan

This was is amazing too! I love how your words flow, and are so powerful. Im jealous :P

I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

An amazing read. Your word choice was really good and the poem had a good flow to it. the title once more you use aliteration, this drew the reader in. The first line of the poem; "May fear be as morbid" really sounds good and is a great start to the poem as the first few lines capture the readers attention. You alsoheld the readers attention throughout ther entuire peice. I suggest to improve it you use a more varied punctuation and split this into stanza. It would be easier to read and look more appealing. But a good read non the less. Keep writing. And sorry for the late poem comment returns. xx

Hey great dear, you are very good at Anglo-saxon use of words. Its great. Max ratings

I liked each word, each line of this great poem but the most touching line for me was

As love once had been sought
In the gloomiest places

so thoughtful dear.
as always a great one with a 5/5 from your fan
goran

Great job. Very well written. 5/5
-vino

Awesome, I loved it.
Phil

Such an excellent poem with a fantastic flow and word choice, it was excellent the whole way through and I was amazed with it. The way you chose to write this was perfect in my eyes, it felt like I was reading something from shakespeare. Amazing job 5/5 GG23