Comments : Her Majesty

  • 10 years ago

    by scarlett

    This is and exellent poem. you did a nice job writting it. it was really easy for me to get inside the character's shoes.

  • 10 years ago

    by Austin

    I think its kinda kool you touched on a subject most try to shy away form I enjoyed it thouroghly (sp ) lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing poem, So unique subject for me. Nice flow and vocabulary used. Very easy to understand what character is going through. Great poem! Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Chrissie

    This was a really good poem...as all your work is! It was a different topic, not alot of poems are about this, but you made it very enjoyable. Well done! Xx Chrissie

  • 10 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    This was a good poem. easy for me to vividly see in my mind. good job. you have talent. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    I liked this poem.. very interesting way to go about such a topic.. it flowed very well and was easy to ready.. god job ... i really like your choice of words in your poems

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was different which it was great to read something from a different cateogory. The flow was nicely done, Your vocab simple but effective. The structure was great making the poem easy enough to read. Nice emotions portrayed throughout it. Well done on a greatly penned poem~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good rhythm
    this poem had a lot of structure
    which is what I like
    you definitly know what your doing
    Great words
    and they all fit really good
    5/5
    wonderful job

  • 10 years ago

    by Sasha

    Nice rhythem and rhyming

  • 10 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Hahaha wow! well penned I like the imagery in this poem. The flow was flawless well done! 5/5! as always XD

    More elegance than Cinderella,
    Prettier than the dress she wore.

    ^ I Really like that two lines! it was really good!

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I enjoyed this peice thouroghly. I love how you used imagery to make her seem perfect but then in some eyes people could see her as not perfect do to her interests in significant other's. Don't get me wrong I have nothing against this, and I think this is why I enjoyed the poem so much..
    Great job, I love how you as I think stated above did not shy away from the subject.
    I look forward to more of your work,
    Elaine

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was diffrent, definatly not the usual subject. I loved the word choice, the flow was great, and the emtion was deep. well penned, wonderfully written 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    This is awsome, its fantasy sort of yt people can relate to it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Heidi Harover

    I really like this poem. I'm into the whole story writing style. (as you can probably tell from my poems i've written) But this poem is great.

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Whoa, that was really different . I didn`t expect that . You touched a "taboo subject" without coming out straight forward and just saying it . The whole queen/princess thing gave it an effect, and I just really like the imagery . Gives this sort of ... enchanting fairy tale air . It flows, and has a good structure .
    I liked it (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wonderful wording.. i didnt realize what this poem was going to be about.. it was just thrown at you with a strong but not overpowering element of shock.. the flow was flawless as welll :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I will admit it took me a while to understand what you were trying to express. I realized it was not the run of the mill parody at the mention of sexuallity
    I found the poem very thought provoking for more reasons than I believe you would care for me to explain

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really how you conveyed your thoughts on a difficult subject in such a unique way. It was very interesting to read. The structure and flow was good, too.

    Keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This is so cute it reminds me of the movies but then again its not...i love how it tells a little story and just gets me feelin like im there with this beautiful women..5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    I really like it becasue its so deep and yet so powerful .. all the descriptive words really help.. so I hope you never stop writing becasue