This poem was different which it was great to read something from a different cateogory. The flow was nicely done, Your vocab simple but effective. The structure was great making the poem easy enough to read. Nice emotions portrayed throughout it. Well done on a greatly penned poem~mel
I enjoyed this peice thouroghly. I love how you used imagery to make her seem perfect but then in some eyes people could see her as not perfect do to her interests in significant other's. Don't get me wrong I have nothing against this, and I think this is why I enjoyed the poem so much..
Great job, I love how you as I think stated above did not shy away from the subject.
I look forward to more of your work,
Whoa, that was really different . I didn`t expect that . You touched a "taboo subject" without coming out straight forward and just saying it . The whole queen/princess thing gave it an effect, and I just really like the imagery . Gives this sort of ... enchanting fairy tale air . It flows, and has a good structure .
I liked it (:
I will admit it took me a while to understand what you were trying to express. I realized it was not the run of the mill parody at the mention of sexuallity
I found the poem very thought provoking for more reasons than I believe you would care for me to explain