Hole in Humanity

by Fixxxer   May 22, 2007


So many problems today it seems..
Not enough goals and too many dreams..
Society still playing it's motherly role
Turning instinct to a gloomy hole.

All that we want and all that we need.
These motivations are all we heed.
Never satisfied by what we gain.
This feeling only drives us insane.

The problem is clear, but dark as night.
We know what is wrong, but not what's right.
Mother protecting with sweet security.
Denial, ignorance, and what we see.

I pray to a God I'm told exists.
I pray that we never raise our fists.
I pray we return to a natural role.
I pray we fill this growing hole.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very deep and true, I totally agree with the message of this poem. I really like it, you wrote it in a great way and picked good topic.
    My favorite stanza is:
    =The problem is clear, but dark as night.
    We know what is wrong, but not what's right.
    Mother protecting with sweet security.
    Denial, ignorance, and what we see.=

    The ending is also very effective.
    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Evil Angel

    I like it, great thoughts and well expressed.

  • 16 years ago

    by mohamed

    Well writen.... good work..
    5/5