Comments : Dreams & reality

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Nicely done. i dont know what to say about this poem. it was so romantic and i loved it. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love the ending on this, I certainly didn't see that coming, it was a twist.
    Flow was flawless throughout, I enjoyed the imagery and the emotion and depth are clear for all to see.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Amazing again...
    your poetry flows so well.
    well done you are a great writer. loved how you made it seem so real rite untill the end... when it was all a dream, shows how we dream the things we truly want or miss... and then dont want to wake up...

    well done

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was awesome! I could feel the love within this one, it is so beautiful.
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Aawww =] And this is a nice job again =] The ending is different then I expected though!
    You just deserve 5/5's =] ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    5/5 great job i loved it keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Good flow, good rhyme. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow i just love all your poems....you're truly an amazing writter!!! which means...drum role plz...lol........im puttign you on my favorite authors list lol....!!!

    <3 i love you silly