Comments : Satirical Accolade

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Your words held such beauty, you portrayed this poem so beautifully its left me in sheer amazement.

    May the azure that lingers
    Around thine eyes be as blue

    Those two lines at the start truely capturing, Made me want to keep on reading until the end. This poem i found to be interesting and lovely. Well done~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by S0u10fS0rr0w

    Hmm, ur intellect is astrounding debbers, i mean, even now i cant use such complex and graphic wording like u use, i give it a 5/5!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    *little scream*

    So my fave of yours Debbie!
    Your language is so gorgeous and i loved the whole tone of this poem.
    Especially the last part, for some reason it made me smile. Don't know why, i think it was the scoundrel bit =)
    Brava m'dear!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Whoa! I like this - what a twist on the conventinal gooey love poem! Usually I'm annoyed when people try to get away with saying things like "thine..." but you've done it quite well. You captured an already eloquent era very creatively. I know I'm not much older than you, but I still have to say that your vocabulary is exceedingly developed for a teenager. Or an American. : D Or maybe you're from Australia... Very good work. The last two stanzas were brilliant.

    -sibyllene

    (One question: you have "Yet as touch is as cold." Do you mean "his touch?" "Your touch?")

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow Deb!
    What a twist on this one. Excellent job.

    Yet as touch is as cold
    as the winter's snow,
    I shall shudder and cry
    in contemptuous fear.
    For 'tis in willful, wicked feats,
    like silent snickering of demons,
    I find thee most charming...

    What a lovely [scoundrel] you are, darling!
    ...Indeed, indeed; in morbid deeds.

    Loved your ending :)
    LOve your friend Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow.. This is really deep. Probably one of the best i have read so far.. your really talented in the art of making poetry.. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow.... great job i think there may be another Shakespeare on the way lol great job you did a wonderful job and thanks for your comment i had made a typo about the guides part i had it written on paper as guided lol well thank you again and great job on this poem!!!:D:D:D

    keenan

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    May the azure that lingers
    Around thine eyes be as blue
    ^^Wow!!!...beautiful
    I loved the choice of words in this one..i liked the twist in this one...great work!
    It flowed smoothly and tyhe vocab was superb!
    Great work!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem starts out like a pretty average love poem but it has a surprising twist at the end, which is rather good. The choice of words was again strong and the imagery was perfect. Excellent work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    I really liked this one. It had wonderful word choice and the flow was good all through out the poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    The transition and contrast from the first 2 stanzas beautiful seemingly perfect romance to the third stanza's "winter's snow" is really effective and just really truthful how love can be amplified in strange ways..

    i honestly love reading your work, and i'll keep checking back.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    The flow is flawless in this piece plus I loved your use of appropriate lexis and style.
    Its superb with descriptions.

    Tc
    With love
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    I was a bit confused reading the heading but after reading it i have realized its content. Superb and well penned.

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Again, a perfect one. i cannot find enough words to describe how great are your poems, as each one of them has its own beauty and its own great message.Yet as touch is as cold
    as the winter's snow,
    I shall shudder and cry
    in contemptuous fear.

    so beautifuly penned.
    in this one i really liked the part

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Beautiful Debbie.
    I love reading your work, because you use such amazing vocab. your imagery is really awesome.
    another great write
    xxxxxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Another beautiful poem by Debbie lol. This was so well written. I love the vocab! Not to mention when I read, I got a sord of peaceful feeling, lol. anyway 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    What can I say, beautiful m'dear. another 5/5 peice. =]

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    You write such intelligant and beautiful poems that I don't see myself ever comparing to. Lol. You have strong use of vocabulary words and just wonderful structer with your writing. Well done. I enjoyed your poems. Thank you very much for the comments. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tay

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    UR a natural poet keep up the goo work
    5/5