Comments : THE DUALITY OF EXISTENCE

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaaaaaaaaah it was such a great work. i realy enjyed while readin this poem. take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man I forgot how good a writer you were. This poem is very inspirational. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    I just got done reading your poem and I'm amazed at all that you included in your poem. It truly shows the duality in the form of words and lines intertwined into a quilt called a poem. You express the title of the poem through out the poem and it was well written & organized. I voted this poem for the weekly contest because I feel that it has some much power in it, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Power & Poetry,

    Nick York

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Wow, good one gary, i really like the perspective. good idea of the barrier between reality and illusion, actually just did a project on this very subject, from Shakespeare's Midsummers Nights Dream. Have you read it? Well if not, i recommend , its a good example of this. keep it up as always gary, with the brilliant writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow. Great piece, your wording is superb. Topic is incredible, really amazing. You have so much poems and this one shoves your experience. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex D

    Very nice Gary, beautiful piece of writ