ONE DAY TO TAKE THE PAIN AWAY

by ShaunaMarie   May 22, 2007


Two hearts
[Broken]
Three Words
[Choking]
Four times
[She took a hit]
Five candles
[Always lit]
Six words
[He said]
Seven tears
[She shed]
Eight pills
[Gently crushed]
Nine times the toilet
[Flushed]
Ten ways
[She looked]
Eleven hits
[She's hooked]
Twelve parties
[She's a wreck]
Thirteen condoms and
[A pregnancy test]
Fourteen razors
[She cuts a straight line]
Fifteen apologies
[And she's still alive]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    I LOVE THIS ONE HUNNI. STAY STRONG

    -TRISHA

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5. wow. astounding poem. so intriguing and poetic. well done. keep writing. its awesome so keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, I read that and it literally left me speechless.
    Its so deep and sad!! I just had come across this poem randomly over the site. I'm glad I found it!! ^^ xx Roxy, Keep it up!! Hope to find some more some day

  • 16 years ago

    by Narphangu

    Oh yeah. I like this poem a lot. But I think I already told you that... Heh.

    I like it more than I like bubbles eating cranberry sauce on easter.

    Way more.
    [[Now dat aughta 'ave tolj'a sumthin'.]]
    PS: I love youuuu. [[With bubbles.]]

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