Needing you close

by Kaila   May 23, 2007


Show me the light in everything dark,
show me now this romantic spark,
listen clear to my thoughts and dreams,
hold me tight when I want to scream.

Be there for me when I'm feeling alone,
Make sure I'm safe and have a home.
Hold my hand when I want to cry,
Make sure you never ever tell a lie.

Kiss me like it's our last day here,
present me to the crowd with no fear,
Smile bright when you see me arrive,
your heart is all I need to survive.

Breath in my soul and kiss the depths,
deep down inside is where your innocence is kept,
Feel my raging pulse when I kiss you,
tell me again and again we'll never be threw.

The fragrance of misty pine against me,
makes me want to set my soul free,
I'll never stop wishing for you to be here,
I'll just pray to the lord, so he'll keep you near.

i no the endings a bit weak but I'm getting emotional and i needed to end it here. plz be nice!

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  • 9 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    I LOVED THIS ONE!

    my favorite lines were

    Breath in my soul and kiss the depths,
    deep down inside is where your innocence is kept,

    those words really showed the emotion you were trying to express in this writing

    amazingly done

  • It's very beautiful. I felt every emotion in this poem. It's just perfect the way it's written. Great job. 5/5

    And yet another breath taking poem. I like the way you write your poems. They're full of emotion. You've got great talent. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 10 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Very Very beautyful...

    specially this stanza...:)

    """"Kiss me like it's our last day here,
    present me to the crowd with no fear,
    Smile bright when you see me arrive,
    your heart is all I need to survive.""""

    RASHEED

  • 10 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Threw=through

    Otherwise a good poem. Do you write a poem and then leave it without editing it again? It's good to go back and change things, revise revise revise and until it's perfect

  • 10 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    It was short and sweet but to the point...And I think the ending was just right..Not the best but you know..

    Kiss me like it's our last day here,
    ^ I really liked that line...It was powerful I thought...

    Anyway...Your a really good writter and I think your going on my fav's...

    Overall 5/5..