Comments : The funeral of hearts

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow! That was a really well-written poem. I liked the title. It was a different poem than what I had expected and I really enjoyed it! Great job and thanks for entering! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I. FRICKEN. LOVED. THIS! Lol, honestly, this is one of my favorite poems I have read. I loved the deeper meaning to it and the descriptions and word choice.

    "And there's a schoolboy shuddering, looking for someone to blame."

    ^^ I really liked that line. I don't know why but as soon as I read it, it was like BAM! Lol.

    5.5
    :]
    <3