Nice poem. Read some of mine.
If i say yours is good, it is.

Overall its an awesome poem!! I love it! It's short and to the point and it has a ton of emotion crammed into that little poem. The flow overall is spectaular and so is the word choice. It speaks of being betrayed and hurt. The only thing, the last line doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of it. 5/5 for sure though

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Amazing, powerful poem with really strong emotions. Great job, 5/5

Sad but beautifully written. Excellent!

Short but yet so powerful write. great write.

all the best and take care

I can hardly read any of your work without at least one tearing welling up. You are amazing, fantastic job, I love every one of your poems, very very well done.