I really loved this poem and all the meaning it portrays, very good flow and word choice aswell. I thought the last stanza ended the poem perfectly, the line "Spring and summer only lead to a fall" is so true. With love it seems no matter how good things get or how
bright the sun shines, winter is always around the corner. amazing write 5/5

Angels in heaven know not my hell
`That line depicts a meaning within it that I can`t seem to explain . It just really sticks to me .

The love in this isn`t just sitting there, but it isn`t totally overwhelming . The choice of words that you used ; I feel was great . It flowed well and the ending that you chose just wrapped it all up .

Brilliant write [:
..__MiNDYY

I loved this poem.. Its one of my favorites that i have read so far. your flow and word choice were really good. Great write!!! 5/5

I loved your first stanza
Except your last line.
It's just me, I'm sure of that.
But I don't like it when people
Dedicate their poem IN the poem.
It's okay if in the bottom they write down
Dedicated to blah.
But if you actually put it in the poem.
It just sounds like your making
A make up name, y'know?
It seemed to me that you couldn't
Find a rhyme that ended with view
So you chose "Rhyme to you"
Apple of my eye
Love that
Die?
Don't like that.
I don't really like the thought of death
In a love poem...
Unless Romeo and Juliet is a love poem.
All in all, dearest.
I have to say your poem felt really forced.
I don't know.
I think it's just your format.

I really liked this one. The rhyming in it was great and I loved the vocab you used. 5/5

What a great poem.. the flow and rythm was really amazing and the whole thing just worked really well.. i really enjoyed reading this..the emotion portrayed was easily felt.. and i loved your word choice.. great job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

I liked this 1 a lot..another well penned work from u=)
The rhyme scheme was beautiful and the poem flowed well...n i soo loved your choice of words for this peice...it held so much of emeotion which was clearly portrayed thru'out...Good work!
5/5!
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

The flow was perfect in this poem, It read easily from start to end. It was penned amazingly and your word choice was fantastic. The only thing i wasn't keen on was ryhming eye with die. I don't like reading the word die in a love poem it kind of throws of the emotion. Other then that this was nice i enjoyed it alot. Well done~mel

Ah, beautiful work. Not that I would expect anything else from you. I love how well your poems rhyme and flow. Nothing ever seems forced. I also really liked how you mentioned the seasons, and how you fitted them in nicely to go with your poem.

5/5, for sure.

I'm not going to quote anything from this poem. If I had to, I’d quote the entire thing and tell you how beautiful it was :). I disagree with 'Startle Me'. I believe the involvement of a significant other within your poem makes this piece far more effective and intriguing. The flow was undoubtedly brilliant, with soft rhyming couplets woven into the poem. Praise is only required when one reads your work, Sir. Very well done :).

Wow, now that was very nice and beautiful in a sense. the wording was perfect and it flowed so great, and its just such a great poem that words cant really describe the emotions that you have on the computer screen, 5/5

Nice job, good imagery and allusions to the Bible. Keep it up!

It was complex, yet very relaxing to read. Beautiful use of words, I love the second stanza and the last two lines. They write truth in a delicate form.

This is a real good poem. Everything of this poem is just too good. I must say u've done a brilliant job!

Wonderul, nice ring to it..........

Wow, very beautiful. I like the rimes. Great job.

I can really identify with this poem. It stood out among the ones I've read so far. Great job!

Amazing, i love it. great job!

Your poem spoke from my own heart...
indeed it was powerful :)

i cant write poems, but i can find good ones & and yours is one of them...

Your poem spoke "from" my heart

i can't write poems, but i can find good ones... and your is one of them :)