Fairytale love

by Karl Wild GG23   May 24, 2007


I gave up my entire world for you,
While you promised to do the same,
It was fairytale love, we tried to pursue,
Now your saying someone else's name.

I guess I should have read the signs,
On my way through lonely town,
I should have read between the lines,
For I'd have surely turned around.

You said it would be you and me,
No matter what anyone tried to say,
At least for now, I'll have to disagree,
I'm not fond of these games you play.

If I gave you time to change my mind,
You'd say exactly what I needed to hear,
Find a way just to leave the past behind,
While making the future so perfectly clear.

You talk your way back into my heart,
Expecting acceptance for all your deceit,
I once felt the sorrow when we were apart,
Now being without you makes me complete.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexymama

    I LOVE U LOL. NAW FOR REAL YOU GOT TALENT. HIT BE BACK BUT BEFORE U DO READ ONE OF MY POEMS. THE NAME IS KALIA.

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    I really like this poem.
    It kinda makes you feel a tad of sorrow,
    with a pinch of hope.
    Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by SeXiSaMi

    "You talk your way back into my heart,
    Expecting acceptance for all your deceit,
    I once felt the sorrow when we were apart,
    Now being without you makes me complete."

    i didnt really expect the ending to be like that.. but its like a reality check to people, you dont always get what you want, and we are better off with certain people in our lives its just the matter of accepting it.. i loved this poem, excellent job!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Really god poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    Great job on the write. I really enjoyed it and could really see where you are coming from. Nice job and keep up the good work. If you could check out some of my work. I really think you would enjoy it. Thank you

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