That is true ppl shouldnt try to be somebody that there not if they dont like u for who u r then they are screwed lolz

Wow.. i agree 1000000% with this poem.. you practically took the words right out of my mouth.. I would love to write a poem about the same exact thing but I don't know if I could do it as well as you did..

I am who I am, what else could I be?
I'll forever stand where I stand, I choose to be me,

I loveee those 2 lines and I practically live by that.. I'm glad someone else does too.. excellent job as always =]

This was good. I like the message expressed. One thing I say often is, "Take me as I am, it's all I'm ever going to be." - This poem takes that to a further level.

Nice work.

Wow.. this is my favorite poem.. the flow was FANTASTIC.. it was very original and filled with a wonderful choice of words.. excellent!

Wow!!...amazing work...so so true...100%

I am who I am, what else could I be?
I'll forever stand where I stand, I choose to be me.

^^So well said...perfect thought..greatly penned...beautiful...Awesome...n this is so true..
i loved it!
5/5=)
Good work!
xxPoojaxx

This is great. amazing. really says you cant change who you are... I know how this feeling goes. great job. keep it up.

Again well put words. so true. The only problem with this one is" who have sold there soul," there should be their. other than that this was fantastic. deep emtion, great flow, well written. excellent word choice. keep up the good work.

This piece is great man. Your writting reminds me so much of Edgar Allan Poes. You use repition very well and your words just seem to fit in harmony with one another. I can see you have had your share of writting. I would love it if you would analyze my pieces and tell me how I can improve, if I can improve. I would highly appreciate that! I'll check back to see other works of yours later in the day.

Nice use of vocabulary
I liked the words you chose to rhyme a lot
The rhyming was good
the rhythm sounded fine
same with flow and all that
great job

I really like this poem "There have been many before me,
who have sold there soul,
Locked the lock and threw the key,
my virtues they now extol." That is my favorite part out of it i dont know why i just love this poem it really makes me open my eyes you know? Great job...5/5

Haha, I know the last few lines are supposed to be firm and powerful, but they actually made me laugh. Sometimes forcing an idea down a reader's throat doesn't work as well as the writer would like. Phooey! Oh well, let me say something positive. I like the message, and I agree with it. You are who you are. Like Popeye said, "I am what I am, and that's all that I am."

I really liked this...so much depth and emotion in this piece, a powerful opener with each stanza thereafter getting better and better.
beautiful work with this.

Excellent, beautiful and outstanding. This piece really reflects your creativity and this is a real poem with sheer beautiful flow and meaning. 5/5 no doubt

Tc
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Aww this was cute.. I really liked it.. I loved how you made everything just fit together. Very good job. It flowed and rhymed really well.. 5/5

Good poem

Wow this poem was amazingg! i loved the meaning of this poem, and the flow was great.. you are a truely amazing poet.. this poem like the others are flawless... 5/5 from me, and thank you for the comment

Sara

This is really good! i can relate to it a lot! poeple always take me the wrong way! great job! 5/5

I can very easily relate to this poem. The meaning is evident and amazing.

In one word: frank.

Amazing. 5/5

Inspirational. i like it. girls can be kaniving (spell?) and manipulative at times. can't let 'em suck you up into their little test tubes.

btw i'm not on your favs wtf dude.