"If you knew what it felt like
To have to endure this pain
You wouldn't get so offended
When I angrily call your name."

Lmao. Oh lordy... this is so true. Thanks for the laugh... 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Good one

Well, on behalf of the male community, 'We are sorry'. I thought it was a great, flowing piece, with a little insight into the female life. We'll usually I rwite quite long comments, but I think I'm done here. Sorry.

Brad

P.S. As always, thanks for your comment and vote on my poem 'Death to the both'.

0MG GiRL!!
AM3N! i F33L Y0 PAiN!
SHYT3 iN FACT I'M PMSiN RYT3 N0W
UGH. S00 PAiNFUL.
SHYT3....L0L
~TiiA~

He he lol. I like the way u hav related ur poem with PMs. great piece 5/5 n fun to read.

Oh my geez.. ain't it the truth. After i read it i just had to sit a minute and laugh!Keep it up girl!

Uh huh thats right thats right, let all the men in the house read this poem and take a glimpse at our PAIN!

Quillx

Lol !! very true!! I was laughing when I first read .. its the first time I have ever seen anybody write a poem about PMS.. it made me think about things I never thought to write about before.. thanks anyway this is hilarious.. and very blunt.. good job and keep up with the work! 5/5

Hahaa. Excellent!

Good choice of subject. & it flowed really well.
Keep it up!
rebeccax

HAHAHA GREAT POEM CHICK.im suffering to right know !!! the poem was spot on .well done xx

Way to put it! that really put it into perspective! rock on girl, keep it up!

xXxX

Haha. You say it. That's something boys will have to learn as they mature ever so slowly. =P

5/5.

You might add,Don`t try and tell us we have PMS only we can say that!very good write,funny.

Exerlent poem loved it

OMG! BRAVO!!!WELL DONE!!!

OMG i SO agree!!!!
-Liz

Lol, nice, i liked it.

I don't know who you are but I love you for writing this poem. It is soooooooooo true!