Comments : Love or Friendship

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    Aww, its sad, but nicley written

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a really nice poem!
    and i loved the ending

    "souls that didnt bleed"
    really nice...
    keep it up always!

  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    Sweet poem and i too like the ending check out some of my poems "I WISH"

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    A sad emotional poem dosen't quite flow I belive this has something to do with the layout a very well though out piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another fine written piece by you. I enjoyed the imagery in this piece, good job. I like the emotions in this poem.

    Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wonderful imagery here! It was almost tlike a little sad love story, especially with the way it was structured. The well expressed emotion made for a very powerful write. 5/5

    marcella