Lol.....perfect...it made sense..lol...loved it...did'nt seem foced at all...perfect..n lovely tongue twisters...the language english can be fun when such type of poetry comes up..great work!
This was definitely funny, amusing and pathetically correct. The assumption some people have of the English language and trying to speak it let alone write it is confusion enough. If it makes sense it probably isn't correct. Thumbs up for the write. Good Job,
Wow, very good, nice use of vocanulary you showed how the english language is so complicated thats why I'm glad its my first language cause learning it as a second language would take me forever, good job.