Damm you ain't ready to let her go yet
aleast not in the words i read. man i could
feel every word. thats good writting. 5/5

Wow this poem is really sad.. the words are the perfect combination to express yourself... you did really excellent.. you managed to use some "bigger" words and still not overpower the poem with them.. yet you didnt use compltetly elemantal vocabulary either.. all in all an enjoyable read.. with a nice structure keep it up :D

True poets write from the heart no matter how much it hurts, you did great here. 10/10.