Your Hazel Eyes

by Goran Rahim   May 27, 2007


Strange, But true
I am dedicating my every breath for you.
Strange, But true
I feel like I do exist
From the moment
My heart started loving you.
Many things are strange
Yet
Many imaginations are true.
This world is beautiful,
Yet
Not more than your hazel eyes.
This life is a treasure
Yet
It is a hell without you.
Many words are lovely
Yet not more than
Three words
That says
"I Love You"

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Beautiful poem. I love your style of writing and the way you make everthing flow evenly though there is no rhyming. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Aww what a beautiful poem.. you really have a nice style of writing and I really enjoy reading your poems. Very nicely written with such deep meaning. Keep it up 5/5 and thanks for reading my poems =]

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Strange, But true
    I am dedicating my every breath for you.
    `You had me from the very first couple of lines . I love that . Just beautiful .

    I think that this piece was beautiful (: The subject is pretty cliche, but you worked it . Though I don`t like poems that don`t rhyme, the flow was continuous and I really liked this .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Gorgeous job goran! i loved this and found it easy to relate to, but it isnt a girl. close enough though.

    great big 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by mrhope

    Hey, I told you before I love this poem.

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