WOW this poem is so amazing, there is so much anger and rage in everyline. The poem seems to real for me because I know of something similar to this that has happend in my life. I thought it flowed very well and the usage of your words were fantastic. Excellent job 5/5 Stanza 3 was my favourite, keep up the great work. GG23

That poem is truly awesome. Newest fave author, keep it up

WOW... I was really speechless in that poem! :) One of the best explicit poems I have ever read! WELL dome! I enjoyed every single bit of it! the word choice was excellent. I love the way you rhymed some lines it was really effective. Flow was flawless! 5/5! all the way!

Wow...That was really really great, everything about it, flow, words, and meaning. Just really good.

totally a 5/5

~*Alex*~

Awsome dear its great with a superb flow except I felt there were few forced rhymes. But 4 sure u deserve 5/5.

With love
Fsams

Excellent 5/5 I felt you have used all the words from the bottom of your heart, it was really great ,well done.Steve

WOW that was really good

WOW that was awesome . I mean it that was great , everything about and deep ,love it i heart goes out to you sweetie great job, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

I am speechless... and you keep writing and I will DEF. keep reading. you are a amazing poet. wow. thats all I can say. :) 100/100 if I could. its great.

Cant express the quality of this poem in words..simply best

This is really good!!!....i hope u can comment on some of my poems and give me advice...ive just started to write them and there not very good hehe but there a way to get all my pain and hurt out for what has happened to me! cheers bree