This was well written, a wonderful peice truly emtional. The word choice was excellent, and the flow was perfect. I can't thinkof anything to add to this poem, or anthing that can be changed to make it better. really a great write, keep it up. 5/5

Hey that was nice, are u new at this? I must say I like the words and rhyme. Please read my Poem entitled, A special world, and vote for it! thxz

My vote for this 5/5

The flow was good and the stanza done well the description was almost picture perfect all and all a good write. Plot121

I'm sorry, dearest,
But I found this to be quite forced.
For example,
Your first line and second line

I long to know your tender touch
To hold you near[[,]] I'd give so much

That felt a bit... eck.
Plus, dear.
I feel as though you need to work on your punctuation.
A poem without punctuation is like
A song without a beat.
It's hard to nkow when to pause
When the sentence is finished.
I think you should work on that.
Honestly?
I kind of thought it was cliched.
No offense.
I just felt like I've heard it before.
I'd rather eccentric than cliched.
It gets... lame.
Lol.
I'm sorry for my teenage language..
All in all, 4/5?

This one flowed perfect n the word choice was also good...it's excellent the way it is..no errors...n the rhyme scheme was good too..n it was filled with emotions..good work
5/5
=)
xxPoojaxx

It was a great poem. Flow was smooth well done! Very emotional! word choice is good. I like the way you rhymed some lines! good job! keep up the good work! 5/5!

Wow. That poem is amazing the rhyming and the flow are excellent, but even more so is the emotion and the pain behind the words. It is so hard to love someone and not have them feel the same way. It kills you each and everyday inside. Your poem is absouletly excellent in describing it. 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Beautiful poem. It has such a lovely flow and I loved the words you used. 5/5

Although it was somewhat cliched, I found the flow and rhyming in this poem amazing. It was generally sweet, and I enjoyed the read. Good job.

Ind this poem a bit cliche. and i dont generally enjy this style anyway so perhaps you may not take my opinion as relevant and i would find no fault in that.

im not going to vote for i think it would be unjust...sorry

Aww that was so sweet u did a great job i loved the flow and the way it rhymed u really did a great job. keep it up
5/5 always
Kate~

Wow.
That was amazing. The flow was like perfect, seriously. The wording was great. I normally don't like love poems; they're so hard to write no one can pull it off. But, boy oh boy you surely did.

Amazing Job.
5/5

That was really nice!!!
Good Job
5/5

God bless u

I can totally realate to this! it's so deep and sweet!!

You are very talented. Another great poem that flowed perfectly. 5/5