Oh my god, this made me shiver... Great poem,
natural flow... 5/5

This reminds me of that weird chick on neighbours, you know Mary... But awesome poem though, really great. <3 it.

Wow!!!
Excellent story-ish write..well chosen words..n good description too...i could form a clear image of the happening in my mind!
Good job!
5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Brilliantly written poem, wording was great and the flow was wonderful, you are truly gifted and very talented, love your poem ,all in all marvelous keep up the great work ,have my eye on you ,,,, your friend Tracy 5/5

Very good.

5/5

Great poem, so sad.
Nice flow and good words.
Much emotions.
Really enjoyed reading it.

Ps. thanks for commenting one of my poems, I really appreciate it.

I really thougth that this was brilliantly written. Your def. going onto my fav. authors.

Omigawd.. i loved that.. brilliant imagery.. made me shudder a bit.. superbly penned.. keep it up ..

~Wake~