Nice poem very meaningful , i lost my mum when i was 19 and miss her everyday on its real sad Steve

I liked this poem a lot,, i like how u dedicated it to ur son
Janaynay

Im sorry your son is like that. It sounds like how I was a few years ago, but I matured quicker than most people. I realized I owe my mom for raising me to where I am and I should pay her back for it. I hope Michael does for you.

This is funny. I like the part when you said straighten your butt up. And WIth that attitude you'll never have a wife. Great job. 5/5
-vino

To answer that yes he can be at times...like right now...but he is the kind of person he very good when he is good and you love him to death. but when he is bad...he is oh sooo bad...thanks for the comments and support! god bless

A great poem I like the rhyming. Flow was good for me! well done!

Excellent poem, love the emotional feeling in it and the story of bring up a child , well told , shows responsibility and respect needs to be learned , great job ,,, your friend Tracy 5/5

I love this poem I know what it is like to raise a child and how hard it is