Mommy, mommy come over here

by AllysonWonderland   May 29, 2007


Mommy, mommy come over here,
come closer mommy, so you can hear,
my eyes hurt mommy, they burn so bad,
when im gone mommy, dont be sad.
ill be here mommy, ill be close.
so give me mommy, give me my dose.
my medicine mommy, i need it now.
tell me mommy, tell me how.
how can i mommy, how can i live,
i have to mommy, i have to give,
my heart mommy, it isnt here,
you have it mommy, you have it near,
dont hurt it mommy, its isnt lead,
goodbye mommy, im almost dead.
ill tell him mommy, ill tell daddy you said hi,
but its my turn mommy, my turn to die.
he chose me mommy,god wants me today,
i have to mommy, i have to say,
i love you mommy, i love you so,
i cant mommy, i cant say no
god wants me mommy, its time to go
i love you mommy, i love you so.

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  • 16 years ago

    by last_petal

    The word mommy give ur poem it's true feeling. this one is a very good one. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    Nice poem, i think repeating mommy made it all the more real and heartfelt...very sad indeed.

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    This was definately one of the best poems ive read! I love it! I got tears in my eyes no joke! for some reason death really gets to me! great job and keep it up! 5/5
    ~Love and Trust~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This is great.....reuseing the word mommy gave it that extra brust of sadness....10/10 i know the rateing scal isn't 10/10 but i give you a 10 dang it

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, this one was rather sad love :(
    it was quite dreadful. poor child really.
    unlike the first person to comment, i think that the repetition of mommy was fine.
    it kept my eyes on the fact that this was from a child to a mom. 5/5 love.

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