Comments : It doesnt matter

  • 10 years ago

    by jauri

    I like this poem
    it reminds me of some one i know not long ago ^_^

  • 9 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Beautifully written. It's so sad yet kind of happy at the same time. This piece is filled to the brim with emotion. Loved it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Aish

    Another great one.
    It flows really well!

    maybe in te last line you could start a new para. or line after "someone who cares"?