Comments : Living in Tenebrous Desolation

  • 16 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Although i can say i liked the poem. the flow of it was inconsistant. some parts rhymed very well and flowed perfectly .. but others did not. ..

    i did however like the repeating of the first stanza. i thought it added, or redid alot. or something.. i just liked it okay?!!? lol

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I liked this poem..very good write..powerful....and i like the last line...there was a lot of emotion in this work n u penned it well..though I am not sure about the structureof this one...I do think it was a nice read!
    Good job
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Thank you both for the comments. If something did not rhyme. I shall go and fix it. Thank you both.

  • 16 years ago

    by Emo

    That was rilly good i luved it i can totally connect wit the feelings there too 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Her odorous poems agonizes my eyes!
    Her words torture my cries...

    These lines are overflowing with strong feelings and emotions. I can feel it very well. Its a beautifully written piece worth 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    WOW Great Write!