Comments : Who am I?

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol...nice work...the last line was kool..
    5/5 from me for this work!
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Fluffy

    This was definitely VERY different. And I believe it's the first funny poem I have read here. And funnily enough, I like it. It's poetic in its own strange way :). To improve, you should put speech marks around the "who am I" in the third stanza. Also, you should take out the 'as' in the third line in the third stanza.

    Other than that, an intriguing read. Well done :)
    P.S: Thank you for reading "Amongst the Confusion" - I'm glad there Muslims out there who understand the piece after reading it once. Thanks! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Okay...
    *bursts out laughing in dead silence*
    this was...
    *tries to stop laughing*
    different...
    *goes drink a glass of water to see if she stops laughing. comes back...*
    =) lol

    speaking about the poem...
    this was quite funny
    i'm wondering who could ever lose passport, id card and have amnesia at the same time...
    lol
    i laugh when i try to imagine the scene...
    5/5
    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa

    Pretty neat. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Hahaha, this was a great one, but if you read it carefully it is more sad than funny, but you have done a great job. keep it up like always.

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I actually totally agree with Elysium. It was funny AND poetic. First funny poem I've liked. Oh and licence should be license :) Keep writing! Never heard of the movie....I'll look for it lol. Anyways, keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by claire

    I think this was sad (beneath the funny) too. its a great poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Great poem. It was funnie and different. Keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm....idk i really didnt take it as something sad or little kidish. i took it deeper. like a person whos been numbed of their past, and lost in the present, and frightened of the future.

    good write though. i will give you a five five becuz it made me think. it was left for thoughts.

  • 10 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I thought this was good. maybe you fooled us.. its supposed to be deeper.. lol anyway great write.. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Haha.. good stuff..pretty funny.. i loved the end.. nice job =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Lmao *rolling on the floor laughing*
    that was funny! expecailly the end, nice wording! Agian you made my nightm I needed a good laugh. lol

  • 10 years ago

    by dejanae

    You need to put more heart into it sweetiie

  • 10 years ago

    by Izi

    Ha ha ha tat made me laugh....lol, tat was stupid!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    Lol, cute poem....lol a bit on the confusing side but enjoyable and filled with laughs

    ---tara

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem ,good flow and wording was great, great job , p.s thanks for the comment to bad it was true, thank your friend Tracy 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Peachy

    So funny/...;p

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Ha ha ha this is unique n so hilarious. wow am stil laughin. u deserve a 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Fsams
    lol.....you come up with some funny things.LMAO...good job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    Oh i love that movie! Jackie Chan's who am i!! great poem!! i couldn't stop laughing! lol
    Janaynay