This was definitely VERY different. And I believe it's the first funny poem I have read here. And funnily enough, I like it. It's poetic in its own strange way :). To improve, you should put speech marks around the "who am I" in the third stanza. Also, you should take out the 'as' in the third line in the third stanza.
Other than that, an intriguing read. Well done :)
P.S: Thank you for reading "Amongst the Confusion" - I'm glad there Muslims out there who understand the piece after reading it once. Thanks! :)
I actually totally agree with Elysium. It was funny AND poetic. First funny poem I've liked. Oh and licence should be license :) Keep writing! Never heard of the movie....I'll look for it lol. Anyways, keep it up!