Although this is really short, it does say a lot. I think that you could make it longer though, it was so excellent I just wanted it to keep going. You have heaps of talent though. I love reading your poetry, even though you don't write much anymore it's still so amazing to read. Everything about this is really good. Well done. Hope to read more soon. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is an excellent poem, I loved the words you used and the flow was great as well. Love can be the most amazing thing in the world when it;s going good, but there's nothing worse then when it goes bad. Excellent job with great imagery 5/5

A little bit dark for a love poem...but i really like it that way... it has a really strong vocabulary and i just loved your metaphors...
the ending surprised me... the last stanza looked really hopefull to me, compared with the rest of the poem...
the 3rd line of the first stanza
"Hooked on toxic narcotics from hearts"
really got me...
i only read two poems of yours yet, but it seems to me that you have a lot of talent...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

"Hooked on toxic narcotics from hearts"
^^Excellent line...powerful words put togthr
The ending was superb...
loved the choice of words
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Wow this poem is amazing. i love how it was really short but i still enjoyed it so much. great rhyming pattern. keep up the good work! definetly 5/5 on this one.

Beautiful. thats all i got 2 say

This was rather delightful to read. Thank you for sharing, once again, your talent with us. =]

Regards,
Debbie

5/5

Awe i remember what it was like to be in that honeymoon period lol :) thank you for making me smile a lil i gave this lil heartfelt poem 5/5 :)

Wow me and my friend tiffani love this :) its sooo amazing nice job
<3 sarah

Heyy nataliee i hvnt read a poem of urs in ages. this was good as!!! u always use such interesting words to express urself. keep it up!! xx

Hey this one is better than your other one imo, it was relly great. It had a powerful message and i loved it.
5/5

Oscar