I loved the flow,
and the whole thing was so touching.
Very sweet and romantic in a way.
It was well-written,
I must say if you're 13 like your profile says.
I'm totally shocked by your writing. Lol.
You're very talented poet already,
as I can tell just by reading this.
Thank you for commenting on my poem.
Keep up the amazing work.
5/5
-Heather