Comments : You Don't Understand

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow really good poem, i can relate, i felt emotion and great flow 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine

  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Sometimes when you get angry, I feel like I could bash my head in or starve myself so I could be ugly and thin,

    Extremely powerful lines. I like how you said "ugly and thin" instead of "pretty and thin." those lines really captured all the pain people feel when they cut or go anorexic and stuff. it was wonderful. 5/5.