Shit this is really good! (Not that Im surprised... it was just simple and brilliant). Liked it a lot - very sad.

Mo :)

Its so good. strong and short.

Short, sad but enjoyable. 5. the last line in the second stanza kinda threw off the flow but you recovered well all in all a good poem.

Its sad, but i like it... i understand what it means

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

Nazeer

Woooooooooooooooooooo i dont even know what to say about that its so good

So good. its nice to see such a simple poem with such a deep meaning.

very good.