Tomorrow. {Cinquain}

by Natalie   Jun 2, 2007


Tomorrow. {Cinquain}

Dark grey
Clouds consume air
Cloaking my happiness
Destroying tomorrow again
For me.

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A Cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem that
consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4,
6, 8, 2 lines.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, Taleee are you okayy? I lovee youu and I loved this poem. It was so simple yet contained so much meaning. I think you used the style really well and i jsut loved it. Nicely donee. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow im really jealous that you can write so many different types of poems because i have a hard time doing different types so mine are pretty much all the same. you are a great writer..never stop writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent poem...different...short..yet perfect!.....and held a lot of depth..
    =)
    5/5
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    For a short poem, it said everything to me...
    the imagery of it was great, it really got me...
    it remembered me of today, actually, this dark morning...
    (i also could learn what a cinquain is...=D)
    5/5
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Although this poem was really short I enjoyed all 8 words lol Excellent job 5/5

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