Roses Are Dead [Collab]

by Darien   Jun 2, 2007


Roses are Dead [Collab]
by: Darien and Natalie

One wish after another blows through the wind
Brushing past countless decisions ready to be made
Faith and hope have fallen beyond mountain tops
Stealing truth and happiness which surely will fade

All those dreams that meant something, disappear
Falling behind fake scenes created in desperation
Every ounce of energy wasted in hopes to survive
Tomorrow is faced with another complexed situation

Laughter fades to smiles, and smiles fade to nothing
Hanging by a small piece of string on its very last thread
Intense emotions circle around with confused thoughts
Remembering every single last word their lover had said

Fingers quickly turning numb and life is impossible to grip
Everything seems to be fading like the writings in the sand
Disturbing flashbacks of timeless tales floating in confusion
Breaking down as memories fail to appear on command

Dreaming of days from the past where nothing felt wrong
And only tears from happiness and joy would fall from eyes
Those were the times where my life made the most sense
Now these wishes wilt away like the dying of the roses.

*Nat and I took a verse each, and the last verse we split two lines each*
** I love working with her! **

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    <Everything seems to be fading like the writings in the sand> I love that line! :)
    You and Natalie did a stupendous job! :) This is very heartfelt and sad, but I loved it. :) 5/5!

    Bri~

  • 16 years ago

    by Twobit

    This is beautiful, bro! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Excellent poem, bro! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Wow, so true, Its a great poem!! states reality in the cold hard facts! nice work both of you! but its not fair that I comment yours and not Nats lol, so I will comment hers now.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    As I toldd Taleee, this was AMAZING. I really loved it. The metaphors were unique and held so much meaning. The flow was good except for the last line was off a little bit. The emotion was very strong and I loved how you could not tell it was written by two different people. It seemed to just merge into one great writer. 5/5