Comments : We're Just Chemicals.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Thankyou for the Comment Love =]

    its been a while since I've really had time to read anyones work but this is wonderful as I have come to expect from you.

    "this isn't my loyalty, it's a fetish for disaster,"

    Lovvvvve that line. Seriously, Hope you are well missy.

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I loved it! You had nice flow wanting me read more of it even though it had ended! lol

    5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I agree with the above comment, i didnt want this poem to ever end, i could have read it forever! i just admire so much, the way you can express yourself and the imagery you use. this poem was particularly effective.
    excellent. FULL STOP

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I don't lack the conscience but i do lack control,

    I can actually relate to that one. Lol.

    Honestly?
    This doesn't even seem like a poem.
    It seems better than a poem.
    I could tell all this came straight from the heart.
    It was quite... riveting and emotional.
    Your word choice was perfect.

    At first, it was kind of blah to me.
    I don't like reading the format that you used.
    It was pretty slow in the beginning.
    But when I read my favorite line.
    I was... hooked.
    I just had to keep on reading.
    This was emotion you could see, feel, hear, taste, smell.
    Loved it.
    5/5?

  • 16 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Wow

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was such mind boggling when I looked at it first time.But it was amazing..You get out your feelings so well and your description were so powerful..and just a thought that It would be perfect if you get that in stanzas..just to make it easy to read
    Other than that
    It was amazing
    Keep it up,
    From another Laura :)