Comments : One Cut To Late

  • 16 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    This is good!!! i loved it!
    amanda

  • 16 years ago

    by littleshadowgirl

    Very good love it

  • 16 years ago

    by sam

    So sad. it really gets your mind working. well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Damn you good. I like this one, the way the poem went was perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Wow!
    Amazing poem!
    Please keep writing

    Danielle
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This was a really sad poem :(
    but it was well worded, my fav stanza was
    "But tonight was the night, she went to deep.
    One cut was all it took, to end a life in such tragedy." it just stood out to me i think its cuz the way u worded it but idk
    i luved the way each word just seemed to flow perfectly to the next
    great work
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    Wow. This one was kinda sad. But it was really Great too. You are a good writer

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Great writer. im going to give u a 5\5. nice job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    The feeling overpowers you. For me, I rate this a 6. Thank you so much for the writing. Please keep it up.....xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    The feeling overpowers you. For me, I rate this a 6. Thank you so much for the writing. Please keep it up.....xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    Good

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    The flow, was excellant
    such a sad peice
    but loved it
    5/5