Thats a good poem.. it resembles of wat i was almost going through.. nice work..

The word choice was good, the vocab was great, the flow was a littlreoff, but the emtion was strong. It looks unprofessional when you use shortcuts, like 2 for to, and u for you, if you would spell out the word you would kepp the readers attention with a better flow. stll 5/5

Great word choice. I know wat ur talking.nice work.

Thanx so much for the comments. I'll def return the favor!

This is a very nice poem, and very true. Good job on it.

~Mary