So hot
lol im not even a
lesbian and i think its hot

Pliz continue this-dont leave out an ything

Mmm i liked it! it was so hot! just reading it made me wet!! lol anyways you should continue and tell everything!

That was very good, got me in da mood. lol

Love it

Umm WOW!! That was really good and hott!!! you should def make more.

Wow. I loved it. So detailed and created really great imagery. I could feel the intensity of the scene so well. Although I wouldn't really call this a poem, it's more of a short story, but a very well penned one at that. A really enjoyable read. Can't wait to read the next one.

Tammie

This was different.. I thought it was really good.. I'm not a lesbian and i thought it was hot.. lol Great job

This is extremely catching. I am even feeling it inside. Superb flow. Just 5/5

Damn that poem was like wow.
it made me so horny. lol
haha
it made me think of me and my girlfriend.
=D

Mmmhmmm...
great imagery :x
wish i could have been there.
i hope it really happened to you, because it seems like one of those experiences that you don't want to forget. 5/5

Very hot!!! i want to hear more

Wow like just wow..
turn on!
gr8 work.. goin 2 read part 2 now *gigglez*
.x

Mmm..very wet right now..im lesbian and this made me think of my ex g/f..amazing!
time for part 2:)

Wow dude thats HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!and wet but mostly wow thats HOT!

WOW DiiSZ iiSZ HOT EVEN DOE ii AiiNT LESBiiAN U SHUD FiiNSiiH iiT

Please please write another one !!
i think i just turned lesbian and i want to read more!!!!!:)