The night of the worst sin of all sins

by Anaisthitos   Jun 3, 2007


The night was a dark curtain
The moon was a full bright disk
The stars were as bright as ever
The time was a deadly risk

The trees where swaying, gently
From the light whistling wind
The air was cool, and stale
The night of the worst sin of all sins

For of this original night
Two opposites meet
The sides of Good and Evil,
You're in for a nasty treat

Nobody seems to notice
An angel gliding about
This is the only time
All must go right now

She takes out a dagger
And fiercely shoves it in the heart
Of a torturous monster
and it begins to fall apart

Now the world is ending
People are dropping like flies
How could something so wrong
Feel so very right?

Now this is the end
The good may rest in peace
The decision is made
This angel killed our soul's beast

~~There are two hidden meanings I found in this poem: 1 I had in my head as I was writing it, and another I discovered after reading it. I'll let you find them for yourself.

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  • 15 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    You are really talented!! i liked how dark the poem was since most of mine are really dark. keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lang

    Love thisss.

    rhyming is good.

    i especially enjoyed this part:
    "Now the world is ending
    People are dropping like flies
    How could something so wrong
    Feel so very right?"

    very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    This is a great poem. I love the way your portrayed the surroundings. Great piece. 5/5. Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Great poem. the only line i felt didn't quite fit with the rythm was

    The night of the worst sin of all sins

    i think it needs 2 be changed around slightly only to fit better

    but well done
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    You know this poem DOES have more then one meaning to it and i love how you did that! I could never write a poem like that and i just wish that i could! I cant belive how talented you are and your younger then me..keep it up and never put down that pen!