Comments : Falling Forever

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really liked this poem, most people have a hard time writing about weather and nature but you did a great job. I too love the rain and any chance I get to just go out and enjoy the feeling of the rain hit my body, I do. Excellent imagery great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by adelinaxx

    Alot of repetition, and it was good
    nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I really loved this one...it was very well written and the imgery was vivid and beautiful...the describimg words you chose were superb..and i love rain..you've painted it's beauty well
    Great job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this alot I found it to be quite interesting. The repetition was good I found you pulled this off quite well. Your word choice amazing making this poem flow so beautifully. For a nature poem you done this amazingly. Truely well written. Well done~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. this poem isnt the best ive read of yours. idk how much the repetition really fits in this poem. however, the imagery was awesome. check your flow again. the words didnt blend as it couldve.

    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I love this poem.
    Although, it would seem better with
    Punctuation.
    Other than that...
    I think your rhyming was smooth.
    Your flow was great.

    PS: Love your format :P
    Your spelling was, too.
    Wonderful right, dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    Hmm, different! but i liked it a lot =] especially this part

    Dancing in the rain
    Singing in the rain
    Eating in the rain
    Sleeping in the rain
    Bathing in the rain
    Living in the rain

    it was really refreshing, i felt like i was actually doing those things
    and it made me thirsty!! hehe

    i gave it a 5

    geo

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I really liked the way this was written. And the concept was unique... it had my interest through the whole read! 5/5