Very well done.. um 2 things i could see that didnt quit blend "L for lame" is that ment to be lame? or the animal lamb, lamb ryms with jam also and the end it says " when mum & me" i think it would flow better if it was with mum & me...
sorry to be picky.. but apart from that well done keep up the good work 4/5
I don't find it particularly funny, whereas I believe that children poems like this one shouldn't be overlooked as if it's of no importance. In fact, this piece was charming and cute. Appealing to say the least.
Nicely penned, as always, m'dear. =]
all the best and take care,
A poem with such a child like essence is refreshing to see. this was cute and a little diffrent. Diffrent in my opion is good. The flow was good, some of the rhymes seemed a little off in some places, other than that the word chose was excellent. nicely done 5/5
It was so cute, i loved it, it is the perfect way to learn the ABC's. nicely done. maybe i could teach my son the same way when he is older. lol. 5/5 my favorite was the letter X, what an easy way to remember it.