Loneliness [Acrostic]

by PoeticJustice   Jun 4, 2007


Lying on the outside
Only trying to escape, This cage of
Nothingness, Left alone to fight the pain
Endlessness, Such a confusing road, Yet
Lost without a map
In a world so cruel and grey
Nevertheless you struggle to hold on
Elusions of a different way, They
Save the life you hold inside
So you continue, alone, through another day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Niice, couldn't have written it better myself. I love acrostics...

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This was a really nice poem...
    i love acrostics, i find it really hard to write...(only did 1, but...oh well...=D)
    the loneliness in your poem can be felt by the reader itself...
    a great poem, i must say...
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I absolutely loved this. There's no other way it could've been explained. It flowed so perfect...and I've read acrostics from people that don't really flow well...but this was amazing. I loved it. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

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