Wow!!...beautiful poem..i loved the twist in the ending stanza...the poem is filled with passion and emotion is portrayed really well...
Excellent job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

This got right into my heart...
really beautiful...
the lines of your stanzas, the way you seemed to cut a sentence in two...i liked that...
though it usually doesn't fit very well, here gave me the feeling that i couldn't stop reading...
the twist in the ending was really nice...
excelent poem...
5/5
*isabel*

Many people say that dreams are much better then reality, but when you fall in love you'll know how amazing life can be when your dreams are no longer as good. Excellent poem great flow 5/5

I lyke the end it waz a great twist and i coudl stop reading it. "Karl Wild AKA GodsGift" i guess when u do fall n love u will realize that dreams r no longer good. Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

The twist was great, awesome work on this one. life is amazing when you are in love, great write 5/5

This is truly greatly written poem.
you have done this so greatly, keep it up dear.