Great poem. It was kinf of long but thats ok. It had a nice flow and good word choice all through out the poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Well i just want to say that if i was the girl you loved so much i would hold on cuz guys like you are really hard to find and if she does not love the same i'm really sorry anyways nice poem i hope you don't mind if take it and show my friend that there really is some nice guys out there

kaitlyn[.<3.]

I was blown over by this piece! =O

Wonderfully penned, nonetheless. It was an enjoyable read. =]

Debbie!

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Congratulations!

Dang dude thats fresh! i feel the power in that theres more heart in that she better know what kind of dude she got.....