Comments : Fart is an art

  • 10 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Haha!
    funny poem! &original...sure made me smile!
    =]
    great ring to it...
    only one place i thought could be different

    The way you fart
    Is a style and art

    maybe if it were

    The way you fart
    Is a piece of art

    the flow would be better...
    but a 5/5 for sure...

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Lol I cant stop guffawing its so funny. Really outstanding. Beautiful rhymes. 5/5 doubtlessly

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Lol very funny and original! Never would've guessed that fart is an art lol. Anyways well done on this!

  • 10 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Your first stanza?
    Hillarious and a bit gross.
    I could actually smell it, EWWW!
    But still, your last line
    On the first stanza?
    It seemd really forced.
    You should change it.
    Even though it is quite funny.
    It ruins the point of poetry if the flow is bad.

    Some resist the power
    I laugh an hour
    Others guffaw longer
    Many run in anger

    Really forced in my eyes.
    I have to admit.
    It's quite funny.
    But it's just didn't flow that well..
    4/5?

  • 10 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Wow, that was funny. Good poem too. Thanks for the comment you left on my poem.
    5/5
    Ravyn

  • 10 years ago

    by silence

    Cute poem :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    OH MY GOD!! THIS IS SO FUNNY!!

  • 10 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Oh my god..that was great. Im bouncing of the walls over here...wow 5/5 great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Hahahahahaha poo hahaha i love that word lol, so funny well done. I do agree it seemed abit forced at one point but still very good poem. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This is funny.. Cheered me up right away i have been feeling down lately. anyway i thought you did an awesome job on this. It flowed really great.. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Along with an awsome smell" (sic) (= Awesome is misspelled in the line.)

    Reading this piece amuses me. It, indeed, was relatively entertaining, and didn't fail to give me a smile. =) Nice work, nonetheless. 5/5

    Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    The way you fart
    Is a style and art
    So when you fart
    Be cool and smart
    ^^^ my favorite stanza!! lol it was sooo funny! definately made me smile..hard! lol good flow and rhyme over all
    ..nuff luv xx

  • 10 years ago

    by claire

    Lol~ this is seriously hilarious!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    LMAO

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    I had reread and reviewed it in response to your request. Heh. =)

    It remains an amusing piece, nonetheless. Keep writing humourous poems and take care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ecupidmo

    Hey! you sure got me cracking..!!
    this poem is smelling hilarious!!
    the flow was good IT WAS HILARIOUS!!
    good one here..LOVE it...!

    you got a good rhythm,i gotta admit..!

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was funny *rolls on the floor laughing
    The subject alone isn't something widely done
    *crying from laughing so hard the flow was good, the rhymes were great and thehumor clear. 5/5 *sides hurt frim laughing so much

  • 10 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Haha!!!!
    this made me laugh
    it was so funny
    i just love this stanza

    The way you fart
    Is a style and art
    So when you fart
    Be cool and smart

    oh great one.
    lol
    best wishes
    and take care
    emmeline

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    This is a good poem, but I don't think you really brought the reader in, I mean what I saw there was no hook to the poem, nothing to draw the reader to read on, just a thought Plot121

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    HAHAHA - came in here to read another poem and couldn't resist opening this one! Hahaha - I am such a toilet humour person. I love talking about farts and I love hearing them even more! My husband can fart and I laugh for ages and then when I calm down, I think about it again and I laugh for even longer!!!

    Hahahaa