The Women Looking Back at Me

by Beautifully Broken   Jun 6, 2007


Looking in the mirror
i see the same person that was there before you
the eyes still the same hazel
the lips still pink
my cheeks still pale
but i see someone totally different
the sadness in her eyes
the pout to her lips
who am i looking at, surely it is not me
as the tears fall i reach up
someone save me from this stranger
oh god some one help me
someone help her
the pain so easily seen
yet so many have not even noticed
is she that good of an actress
behind the pain there something familiar about her
something bright and cheerful with the old her
something only love could have brought
but she mourns some one else
where is this love coming from
someone save us!
she in love and doesn't want to be,
she in love with two men
how is that possible
how can she chose,
how can she go to the one
while her heart was shattered by the other
Someone save her from this
Someone save me
it all in her eyes
she doesn't know how to tell him
the ones she loves
ones gone from her life
while the other stays
the one that stays has no idea of the love
the one thats gone doesn't know the pain he cause
someone save us
someone save us please
turning away more tears fall
the women looking back at me in the mirror
was me, but i am still a girl
yet a women is trapped with in,
in hell with her emotions
the lack of understanding
someone help, before its too late and all hope is lost

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  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Great poem keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I totally loved and relate to this one =P I don't know why love has to hurt so much =( I've been in this mess and still am but no one ever really seems to see pain in someone elses eyes =(
    A truly fantastic job at capturing the emotion and pain behind this that make the reader actually feel it themselfs =) 5/5 ^_^
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by deathdealer

    Whoa

    i like the poem , the best part of the poem begins at "the pout to her lips" and ends at while the other stays" the rest is good but that is the best part of the poem =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Black night

    Wow. Its so deep and painful, you can feel what you are tryig to say. The undercurrent of emotion sweeps you off your feet as you read it. A masterpeice.
    5/5
    take care
    -Black night-

  • Good job keep it up i liked it :)~melissaraye~

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