Cremated insanity

by repair her heart   Jun 6, 2007


Protected resistance that guards the caged known
Open eyes cant escape to see what is disproved with eyes
Endless cold listened to shallow unmeant words
Keen strength runs to hide in unanswered closure
Unmoral beckon that sways decision to uncertain
Pours down diseased core, now naturally leaks conceit
Frantically defeat beats stable out of lived reality

Faded scream drags to capture dissolving bliss
Swollen smile seeks serenity from frozen seepage
Weakened chest smashes the irony of the well kept
Building vengeance, relaxes muscle, seeps pure bane
Tense fist releases each empty illusion word
Hands liberate tenderness, radiates to secure
Hectic pressured applied, numb sore stays deadened
Crowded mind shudders do to occurred graze

Decaying soul dodges each life taking bullet
Complete heart hollowed, no gain from pain
Hesitant heart competes to beat each beat
Triumph gasp ends as it is effectively taken
Dry life fails to seal vain wound
Time emits pleasure yet cuts off it circulation

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    An amazing write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Very nicely written, dark piece of work. I quite enjoyed the stark imagery you portrayed in this piece. Nice job, nonetheless. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by jason

    Well poetry is something that should not be graded really ever.. everything in this poem was good though... great thoughts = ] i am a real fan of dark and depressing poem because they have the most thought and meaning in them = ] anyways i give you a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Wow!
    That was amazing!
    Awesome Vocabulary!
    Lovely Flow
    A very great Poem
    Fantastic really
    Loved it!
    The vocabulary was very impressive
    I can tell or even feel how much it hurts.
    wow,just wow
    Great poem indeed
    keep Up the Awesome work!

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