Comments : How Low Can Someone Go?

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this is truly a great write with a deep meaning and emotions in it. you have showed your great talent through this poem, keep up the great work cause they are amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    That is sad. how can people actually do something like that??? well... your flow was good, the vocabulary was pretty simple though it suited the poem so that was okay. it was pretty beautiful though.
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow great poem!!!!!! I love your writing its so deep!
    ~laura~

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Aww.. Lucy!
    That was wonderful.. So sad and full of emotions.
    The flow was great.. and the vocabulary perfect.
    I loved it hun,
    Well done,
    Elly (elaine)

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Wow that was so great. The vocabulary was simple, but the message was clear, and it was so deep and emotional, and flowed perfectly. Perfect poem, I would say : )

  • 16 years ago

    by mrsmoore

    Lucy this poem is so beautiful. it's really sad, but it is so beautiful. i could feel your pain when i read it. i know what you mean and can understand. i'm so sorry.

    keep smiling. things always get better if you keep a happy mental attitude.

    very beautiful poem. i like it very much.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    It surely is! :(
    well, I think everybody agrees with what you've said here.
    that is such an interesting question to think about. you chose the title really well Lucy.

    Marjan