Comments : Just a friend [retourne]

  • 16 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    "My heart pounding, bleeding, weeping"
    this line is my favourite, love the repition of it
    good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Thnank u.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Oh this poem was so good.i loved it.the imaginative was great and the flow was really good.
    keep up the good work.
    5/5
    best wishes