Comments : Beauty has found a name (pictures)

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is an excellent poem david, i mean it, it tis long but very good, love the flow and storyline, i give this a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Oh. It's a beautiful piece, David! =D You should be proud indeed. (^^,)

    I liked the progression of the plot. It was relatively well-presented, detailed, and pleasurable to read. I'm looking forward to read more of your works. =]

    Debbie!

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    Daviddd!! I love this...just the way you wrote it is amazing. I love the story it told...mainly cuz it was real and came frm the heart. And the idea of the pictures was really creative. Very good write! 5/5

    -Me =]

  • 10 years ago

    by SilverStrider

    Good write dave. love can change a many things in a man. take care of her because you only get one guardian angel in your life.

  • 10 years ago

    by Denise

    It was good..
    i wrote a new one myself..
    go check it out

  • 10 years ago

    by Denise

    There is no music...lol
    i cant htink of any

  • 10 years ago

    by Meme

    Good job :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Awe! that was sooo cute! your girl friend must be a lucky gal. But some people aren't lucky enough to find someone who loves enough to write beautiful poetry 'bout them. Well good luck to you and yours. Ummmm... the poem was really good, but i'm afraid that i was not able to gaze upon the pics. But the writting was so good, i was able to paint a mental picture of what was going on. Good job, and keep up the amazing work... as usual. ttyl sumtime.

    MBHD

  • 9 years ago

    by robin milford

    David this is a great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Aaaaaawwwwww! How sweet.

    ....nerd. :p