Daviddd!! I love this...just the way you wrote it is amazing. I love the story it told...mainly cuz it was real and came frm the heart. And the idea of the pictures was really creative. Very good write! 5/5
Awe! that was sooo cute! your girl friend must be a lucky gal. But some people aren't lucky enough to find someone who loves enough to write beautiful poetry 'bout them. Well good luck to you and yours. Ummmm... the poem was really good, but i'm afraid that i was not able to gaze upon the pics. But the writting was so good, i was able to paint a mental picture of what was going on. Good job, and keep up the amazing work... as usual. ttyl sumtime.