A very heartfelt and touching poem. The concept and meaning behind it is both unique and powerful. The flow was flawless, and the rhyming exceptional. There was such truth in these words, which is hard to accept, being such a terrible thing that happens in this world. An excellent poem. 5/5

Tammie

This poem Karl, I have read before and have been waiting for the weekend so I could comment. I'm truely happy someone would write such a poem on a topic as of this. It was a real heart wrenching piece which you portrayed holding so much emotion and inspiration. You wrote about something which was real and added your own impact into this. I found this to be an amazing piece of poetry. Yet again you have amazed me with your words of such beauty. Well done on this an enjoyable read which was powerfully sad and capturing. ~mel

This poem isnt true,and i should know i stay in africa, not all black ppl suffered, and now they have taken revenge on our generation, im not saying what the white ppl did was right, but what about now? nobody writes about all tha white ppl being killed, or my friends getting raped and murdered? the past is the past why cant everyone just move on and live in peace?

Omg I like this poem its so amazing. i love the rhyming and the last part you said:
Enforced hatred for such an unworthy destiny,
Took America's rank to the top of the chart,
Even today we're only safe to a certain degree,
Always beware of, White Hunter, Black Heart.
That part. Well Great poem 5/5

Wow...i liked this poem because it talks about life..history. ive always been intrested in that subject, pity i didnt take it =[ newai..great poem! nice flow and good use of vocab! the meaning is quite strong, and the message clean..i like it!
nuf luv xx [ so sorry for the late comments, i was held up with exams =]

I was quite surprised of how much i enjoyed this. ill be bk for more welcome to my favs

5.5

Wow
omg
this poem is amazing.
it is so perfectly written and with a perfect title.
i loved it.
your words portray ur message so brilliantly...
awsum!!

Wow. it was just so beautifully written, and so true, you have such a talent. the way you write is truly amazing. 5/5

Good poem

This is amazing, one of your best I have read so far. It tells a true and powerful story. You created amazing imagery with the perfect choice of words. From the very begining I was drawn in, couldn't stop reading. The flow... flawless! Great write. 5/5

marcella

Beautiful and true; and there are probably no better compliments for a poem. This is something that needs to be said much more than it actually is. Wonderfully written!

This was certainly a beautiful peice! I loved it great job!