This poem was heartaching.
i felt it so deep

The pain is so unbearable
It felt like I was stabbed to death
Oh how I wish it was a dream
That this heartache is not for real

The bleeding wound wont stop, I weep
Your words strikes my heart, way too deep
It felt like I was stabbed to death
My heart is wounded, will it mend?

best stanza of all.
hope you right more good poems as that.
5/5
superb work

best wishes